Chapter 6 - Unraveling in Chicago

By the third week of October, Unit 14B at the Sterling Tower had transformed from a luxury residential sanctuary into a war zone of domestic rancor.
The luxury building’s trash chutes were constantly clogged with empty fast-food wrappers, unwashed plastic takeout containers, and half-filled coffee cups that Madison refused to carry down to the recycling bins. The maid service that I had employed twice a week had ceased three weeks earlier when the auto-pay credit card was canceled; the master bathroom floor was sticky with hairspray and spilled foundation, and the living room smelled persistently of Evelyn’s camphor-heavy joint liniment.
Daniel sat at the kitchen island, staring at his laptop screen through eyes that felt like they were full of ground glass.
He had lost eight pounds in twenty-one days. His shirts, no longer washed and pressed by the dry-cleaning delivery service I managed, were wrinkled and bore faint yellow stains around the collars.
His work performance at the logistics brokerage had unraveled with terrifying speed. Without me to manage his schedule, pack his lunches, iron his suits, and listen to him rehearse his client presentations every morning over espresso, he had missed two critical shipping tenders for a major automotive parts manufacturer. His regional director had called him into a closed-door meeting on Friday afternoon and informed him, in blunt, uncompromising terms, that his commission tier was being reduced by thirty percent until his ‘domestic distractions’ were resolved.
Behind him, in the living room, Evelyn was banging her cane against the leg of the coffee table.
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“Daniel!” she shouted, her voice like sandpaper on tin. “Where is my chamomile tea? The doctor said I need hot liquids every three hours to prevent my lymph nodes from swelling! It’s been three hours and twelve minutes! Are you trying to kill me through neglect?”
“I’m working, Mom!” Daniel yelled, not turning around. “I have a quarterly audit report due to the regional VP in forty-five minutes! If I don't finish this, I don't have a job!”
“Don't you take that tone with me!” Evelyn screamed back, her cane banging harder. “I am your mother! If you had married a decent woman instead of that cold-blooded corporate viper, you wouldn't be sitting here boiling water like a kitchen boy! A good wife would be here rubbing my feet! A good wife would have dinner in the oven! You let that woman walk out of this house with all your money, and now you’re taking it out on the woman who gave you life!”
From the guest bedroom, the door flew open with a violent crash.
Madison stormed out, wearing an expensive silk robe that had once belonged to me, her hair in messy buns, her phone held out like a weapon.
“Can you two shut up for five minutes?” she shrieked. “I am in the middle of a live brand consultation with a holistic agency in Miami! They can hear you screaming about chamomile tea in the background! Do you know how unprofessional that sounds? You’re destroying my business before it even starts!”
Daniel slowly stood up from the kitchen stool.
His chair fell backward, crashing onto the hardwood with a loud, violent crack that made both women freeze.
Daniel turned around. His face was gray, his lips pulled back over his teeth in a snarl that was half-madness, half-feral exhaustion.
“Your business?” he whispered. His voice was hoarse, shredded from three weeks of shouting. “Your business, Madison?”
Madison blinked, taking a half-step back, startled by the manic intensity in his hollowed-out eyes. “Daniel, chill out—”
“You don't have a business!” Daniel roared, his voice echoing off the bare, uncarpeted walls of the apartment. “You have never had a business! You are a thirty-year-old parasite who has spent seven years living off our father’s meager life insurance, our mother’s guilt, and my credit cards! I have forty-eight thousand dollars in personal debt because of your failed salons, your ruined leases, and your cosmetic supplies that are currently rotting in a storage unit in Cicero! And you are standing in my apartment, wearing my runaway wife's clothes, telling me to shut up while I try to keep us from being evicted onto the sidewalk?”
Evelyn gasped, clutching her chest with both hands. “Daniel! How dare you speak to your sister like that! She is delicate! She has chronic fatigue syndrome!”
“She has chronic laziness, Mom!” Daniel screamed, turning on his mother with such fury that Evelyn instinctively shrank back into the cushions. “And so do you! The doctor told me on the phone yesterday that your knee was fully healed four weeks ago! He said you should be walking two miles a day! He said the only reason you’re sitting on that couch like a beached whale is because you want someone to wait on you hand and foot so you can feel like a grand lady!”
“You… you ungrateful wretch!” Evelyn sputtered, her voice shaking with genuine, humiliated fury. “I gave you everything! I sacrificed my life for you!”
“And what did it get me?” Daniel cried, tears of pure, unadulterated self-pity finally streaming down his stubbled cheeks. “Look at this place! It’s a pigsty! Claire paid for the cleaners! Claire paid for the groceries! Claire paid for the mortgage, the electricity, the health insurance, the vacations to Cabo, the Christmas gifts for your ungrateful cousins! She paid for everything, and all we did was sit around and talk about how she wasn't traditional enough, how she was too focused on her career, how she didn't respect you enough!”
He dropped his head into his hands, his shoulders heaving with ragged sobs.
“She’s never coming back,” he wept. “She’s sitting in California in a luxury suite, watching the ocean, and she’s never, ever coming back. And I have eight hundred dollars in my account and thirty days before the sheriff puts our furniture on the curb.”
Madison looked at Daniel, then looked at Evelyn.
There was no sympathy in her face. There was only the cold, mercenary realization that the host had been fully depleted. The marrow had been sucked from the bone, and there was nothing left to consume.
Without saying a single word, Madison turned on her heel, walked back into the guest room, pulled her two designer suitcases out from the closet, and began tossing her clothes inside.
“Where are you going?” Evelyn cried, her voice cracking with terror as she watched her daughter zip the first bag. “Madison! You can’t leave me here with him! He’s lost his mind!”
“I’m calling Kyle,” Madison said coldly, referring to an ex-boyfriend she had spent two years describing as an emotionally stunted narcissist. “He has a two-bedroom in Logan Square. Unlike my brother, he actually knows how to pay his rent without having an emotional collapse every Tuesday.”
“Madison, please!” Daniel begged, falling toward the bedroom door, reaching for her sleeve just as he had reached for mine in the Drake lobby three weeks earlier. “Don't leave me with Mom! I can't take care of her alone! I have to work!”
Madison pulled her arm away with a look of pure disgust.
“That sounds like a personal problem, Daniel,” she said, echoing the exact phrase he had used on her six months earlier when she had asked him for rent money.
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Ten minutes later, the heavy oak door of Unit 14B slammed shut.
The sound resonated through the empty, uncleaned apartment like the closing of a tomb.